Throwing the Nuke Where are we today It feels like your there and I am here We are not alone in this This fucking broken mirror Pieces of us lay useless In this tragedy of our youth Stop confusing me Before you break my foot Stop throwing the nuke in my face And try to find your soul I know your broken heart hurts But your driving me insane I can’t stop you But you can stop me Cause I have to give up You can’t accept this fight The fight of our love I have been knocked out cold The blood is down my neck For fuck’s sake, get away Cause I feel like the reject I don’t want to hate you But I have to I want to love you But you won’t let me My god, I hate feeling like this sometimes It’s all your fault It’s all your god damn fault
i think this is good. however this part seemed like you were trying to rhyme too much. apart from that it was good.