His Own End

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    forfeit3

    forfeit3 Well-Known Member

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    i just wrote this rap in about 5 mins, i hope you guys like it. thanks for the comments!

    His Own End

    Every day he walks,
    People think,
    He talks,

    He’s always acting,
    Constantly cracking jokes,
    And he even increase,
    His own bulk,

    The weight on his back,
    Makes him think,
    He’s gonna crack,

    All he does is disagree,
    Anyone will tell you,
    It’s not hard to see,

    He just blabs out his thoughts,
    Taking no consideration,
    And he rot’s,

    Away his self credibility,
    And on the inside,
    He’s got no ability,

    To cope,
    He knows he’s gonna get it,
    He’s got no hope,

    But then one day,
    It happens,
    He’s okay,

    He’s figured it out,
    And know he knows,
    Not to shout,

    His ides have new meaning,
    Something different,
    Like they have a feeling,

    And everyone listens to him now,
    He’s got the key,
    And they all wonder how,
    This was to be,

    On his own, he’s self defeated,
    Because now,
    He’s now in the ground,
    With no help needed.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

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    good job. Keep it up.
     
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    fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    this was pretty good! me likey ^_^
     

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