Learning to let go

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    chazy_chaz_fan

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    Chorus:
    And now
    (now I see you're only useing me)
    I see the truth in all your lies
    (now I see you're whats confusing me)
    I see the helplessness inside, my soul, I feel I've lost controle
    Leave me alone
    (just get away and stop abusing me)
    While I'm learning to let go.

    Verse 1:
    I can't believe I gave into your lies
    (I trusted you) Though it felt wrong inside.
    I tried to hide all the scars within my heart
    (but through it all) you were always tearing me apart.
    I turned away from the world that I knew
    (I stayed with you) there was nothing I could do.
    I can't believe I didn't leave and I fell so fast,
    (try to stop) but in the end the pain was all I had.
    Holding me in a chain, something still remains
    Can't break away, so now I've become your prey
    (now it's gone) Now that you are gone, I can see,
    A peice of you that still lives in me, now I see...

    Chorus: And Now
    (now I see you're only useing me)
    I see the truth in all your lies
    (now I see you're whats confusing me)
    I see the helplessness inside, my soul, I feel I've lost controle
    Leave me alone
    (just get away and stop abusing me)
    While I'm learning to let go

    Verse 2:
    I can't believ I let you use me that way,
    (everyday) I just tell myself that I'm okay.
    This is the truth, this is all I'll ever be
    (I couldn't see) How much your words were killing me.
    (now all I see) Is the way I fell so fast,
    I tried to stop, but the pain was all I had.
    Holding me in a chain, something still remains.
    And now I see, a peice of you that lives in me, now I see...

    Bridge: I can't belive the way you always used to laugh at me.
    I can't believe the way you always had looked down on me.
    You had me blinded but now I can see it perfectly,
    the way you used me and abused me, holding on to me.
    I broke away and showed the world what you did to me,
    Now I see that theres a part of you that lives in me....

    Chorus X2
     
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    ISnortMyPixieDust

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    I love it! I really do, I can imagine what it would sound like if it really were being sung. The rhythm and everything, it's great. And you're really potraying feelings really well. Keep writin'! (how many times did I say "really" in this? Jeez.*off to get a vocabulary*)
     
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    BunniesAreAttackingME

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    :D :p :D :D ^_^ LOVED IT!!! Very good!!! Write more!!!Really, write more SOON!!!I must cut down on the caffeine!!! :lol:
     
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    Methybrea

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    Great work!

    Go take a look at 'Diction', guys if you have the time!
     
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    chazy_chaz_fan

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    Go look at who? And Sara....did u review twice?! U psycho! Sara.... sugar is your friend, but I think u like it a bit too much! TTYL! have fun miss pixie!
     
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    ISnortMyPixieDust

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    Yeah, i reviewed twice! is there a problem? and now i'm posting 3 times. get over it. :eek:
     
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    very very good
     

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