Do You Know Where I Belong

Do You Know Where I Belong

I think my faith is weakening,
Your silence is like shouting,
Do you know where I belong,
And if everyday I didn’t have these doubts,
My life would cease to fall apart,
But my faith can’t offer me anything,
I’m lost amongst these dreams,

What if my believe wasn’t true,
Have I lived a lie,
Should I lose my faith,
Or continue through,
Do you know where I belong,

I’ve been living in a dream,
Creating a broken illusion,
Do you know where it belongs,
Where should I place this creation,
In this lie that I believe,
What is it that I’m seeking,
Other than this desire to shed my skin,

What if my believe wasn’t true,
Have I lived a lie,
Should I lose my faith,
Or continue through,
Do you know where I belong,

Where does it all belong,
Have I spent too long,
Following this illusion,
Do you know where I belong,

What if my believe wasn’t true,
Have I lived a lie,
Should I lose my faith,
Or continue through,
Do you know where I belong.

thoughts please...

 

I like it. I like the topic, I'd been there before, lost my faith, decided it was impossible, researched it, then researched scientific ways everything happened. I side with science, anyways... It's writtin well, very relatable. Nice.

 

Yer it hard, I mean when you look at science there is no way you can ignore it. But then once upon a time people thought religous explanations for everything were correct. who knows. Science could be totally off the mark.

Back on topic.

Great poem, very easy to read and very easy to see and relate to the message. Good work. Keep it up.