Loss After Life

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    arT saveS

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    Ha, so maybe I lied...I love writing.

    …and we will live with wings
    To carry ourselves away
    With golden roads…
    With hopes and dreams...
    And we will live in paradise
    In love
    In harmony and peace…
    And He will stand before us
    Perfection materialized

    Bullshit

    Please, deafen me from these words
    Don’t want anything to do with…
    Any of this religious bullshit just let me sleep
    Sleep is my escape from this dream we are in
    Hell is not on earth
    This is heaven
    Heaven is hell
    (Nonexistent)

    Heaven

    Beautiful skies beautiful angels
    Beautiful god…UGLY
    Darkness in nothing
    A fabricated story…STORIES

    And we will die to never return…
    Anywhere
    With nothing
    With nobody
    And we will live in heaven…
    Eternal separation from this

    Harmony…Happiness…Bliss
    Only in death…
    Excellence…precision…accomplishment
    Loss after life…
    Death…Demise…Decease
    Loss after life…
    Pain…fatality…casualty

    And we will live in heaven…
    Eternal separation from consciousness


    Edited the song a bit. New name, "Only In Death".
     
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    fallenangel

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    fucking brill! i love the topic and i have to agree with what you are saying.

    so glad your writing again. i love reading your poems! hope i get as good as you one day! ;)
     
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    arT saveS

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    Thank you, for the comments and the complements. :)
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    LOL. Great stuff.
    I read up to here
    and i'm like holy shit, your going to write a "happy" poem.
    But then
    and i know it is the fall.into.sleep that we all love. Nice intro, had me fooled, and an all round great poem. Absolutely fantastic.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Good job.
     
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    arT saveS

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    Haha, :lol:. Thank you, this is probably one of my favorites.
     
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    bleeding rose

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    Great work! :)
     

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