Between The Lines I cannot seem to read between the lines To see what is within I’ve always felt so lost and out of time Deprived of everything The world around has always looked at me Through eyes full of disgrace I should’ve known better than letting it All inside of me Take the pieces of my broken trust And put them back again I don’t need no pity and remorse I just need a friend There is no sun shining in my life Everything is black When something is now already done You can’t take it back I really need to find the answers to The questions that infest My soul and mind I feel it’s tempting me Like some kind of test I know the sorrow and I know the pain But nothing can compare To the emptiness inside of me That’s eating me again
Nice work, rhyming not forced, nice flow and a powerful message, good stuff. i liked this much better than crossroads. but this is just my opinion. Great message, i love this poem, awsome work. keep writing.