Eternal Coma

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    El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    El Muerto, Apr 30, 2005



    Eternal Coma

    Woe reflects in her eyes
    No matter what she says I know she’s not all right
    Because the more she tries to forget
    The more she recollects the pictures in her head
    And she may never know
    How much she means to me
    And she may never see
    What life can be
    Just what life can be
    She goes

    Miles and miles
    And she will never be home
    Hours and hours
    She keeps spending alone
    Her lonely mind
    Wanders somewhere unknown
    Never again
    To have a life of her own

    When the lights go down
    No matter what she tries she can’t leave it behind
    And she can’t lie to me that she hates
    She still loves, she loves
    She will never forget
    She goes

    i want to hear what you think about it
     
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    Glue

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    Glue, Apr 30, 2005



    nice i like it very much... ;)
     
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    fallenangel

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    fallenangel, Apr 30, 2005



    again, i think this is really good! ^_^
     
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    bleeding rose

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    bleeding rose, May 2, 2005



    Miles and miles
    And she will never be home
    Hours and hours
    She keeps spending alone
    Her lonely mind
    Wanders somewhere unknown
    Never again
    To have a life of her own

    i love that part ...cant wait for the next one. Well done :D
     
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    El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    El Muerto, May 3, 2005



    thank you very much
    i've got so much more to post here so... stay tuned :lol:
     
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    minuteforce

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    minuteforce, May 4, 2005



    that's real emo ... excellent.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    D_A_V_I_D, May 4, 2005



    Absolutely brilliant, great job, awsome poem, keep up the great work. This is just great and i must agree with bleeding rose
    that part is totally awsome, keep up the writting.
     

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