A Thousand Suns

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    arT saveS

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    Existence, a false beginning
    A terrible way to live life…

    I’ll push ahead, scrape the mold…
    Perfect nature, replace the world…
    Stop the suffering, cure the sick…
    I’m ready, ready…

    We’re stuck here in reality…
    Looking for ways to alter our ability…
    To see what is there…
    Change our perception of the world…
    Curious to see if we’re alone…
    Alone…

    We’re taking over
    Everything…
    Everyone…
    Complaining
    Retaliating…
    We’re no one…
    We’re nothing…
    Never be…
    Anything

    Despair comes with a cold greeting of pain…
    Poisons that infect me
    Burn like a thousand suns
    And my loneliness compares…
    To the stars in the sky
    No more innocent minds taken…
    No more innocent victims…

    Take your plague...
    Wrap it around your neck
    And suffocate…
    Drown and decay
    Bleed for my pain
    Save me
    SAVE ME

    A thousand suns blaze the earth with fiery finesse
    A thousand suns rage with hell’s fire…
    A thousand suns suffocating us with it’s wrath…
    A thousand suns bleeding for my pain…
    Shining for my hope…
    Celebrating my desire to cure…
    A thousand suns carrying me, protecting me…
     
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    Heavy is the Louis

    Heavy is the Louis No really, we are so back. LPA Team

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    Not bad. Keep up the good work.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    One word,

    NICE
     
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    fallenangel

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    what can i say? great! ;)
     
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    arT saveS

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    Thanks everyone. I don't think I will be writing anymore for quite a while. I've written quite a lot of stuff in the last few weeks, had to get some anger out, had a lot of ideas, but mostly it was all within one topic. Government. I write a lot about god, and questioning humanity, and you know stuff like that. And I've written a couple about human feelings, most of those I haven't posted, the god ones, the humanity ones, the emotion ones, I posted a few, but since at the time I was really at the government, I posted all of it. Anyways, I need a little break from writing since if you write a lot, and your good at it, it takes a lot of thought, which in turn makes you very tired and what not. So I'm just going to take some time away from writing. But I know I will write again sometime because I love writing. Anyways, not to bore you with all of this, just letting you know.
     
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    Glue

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    good job... :lol:
     
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    fallenangel

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    sad but i understand :(

    but i will be awaiting the next lot of poems cause you have such a talent but recharging the batteries is also good!
     

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