Disguised, lost and lonely in subliminal thought… Surrounded, alone in life, clouded and cloaked… Enclosed in this dark mist, hidden within shadows… Bounded and veiled, parading imperfections… Brainwashed puppets that control us… Throw them into the abyss and impede our destruction… United with hate, in a State of Aggression… Global disgust, in a condition of pandemonium Give way to control; give way to ‘freedom’ Give way to giving in; give way to lying down Shaping our mistakes, constituting murder Blanketed by the lies that protect us… Too blind to know that we are the lies… Experimental product… Manufactured for consumption We are alone in this… Shields for the president United with detestation, in a State of Anarchy… Global loathing, in a condition of mayhem Give way to power; give way to ‘choice’ Give way to compliance; give way to force Forming our beliefs into what they need Declaring execution a legal form of venting stress… Denouncing any chance of living in harmony Too dumb and too ignorant to change our ways Keep on living as so does the bloodshed and the pain Living to die, to repent sins, bow to the blessed To be viewed and held by holiness… And be carried away…no more pain United with corruption, in a State of Annihilation… Global hatred, in a condition of havoc Give way to religion; give way to difference Give way to ruins; give way to damage Constructing cracks in our feeble institution Yes, I know, kind of short. But let's think quality not quanity.
Another outstanding poem, i love your work and your style of writing but i have one thing to say. I think you need to move on to another topic because you just keep writting about the same thing and i would like to see you go into other areas of life, other than the corrution of our world. Not saying this in a bad way but i am starting to get a bit board of your writting constantly in the same topic. Sorry to have to moan like this to such a talented writter but i think you deserve to know the truth. This is still an amaing poem but yer..... Keep writting.
I've written about other topics, but it seems to me everytime I do I don't get any replies, figure no one likes that style, so I go back to what people seem to like. Songs like "Within Me", I thought it was really good, but it didn't get any replies so that made me think otherwise. I'd love to write about other topics, and I do. But since that is a topic I'm very into, I write a lot about it. But thank you for being truthful, and I appreciate it a lot.
i love your poems! you seem to be quite an opinionated person, which i like. about changing your topic, i think it's a good idea and since i haven't been posting that long i will try and read some of your older stuff. but, fab effort. i would love to be able to write as good as you!