Demons on My Shoulder

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    arT saveS

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    Create your own death…
    Meditate the thought of existing
    Inner living demons that drag you down
    Rip them out of your soul,
    Cast them out
    Let go…

    Of your dreams…
    Of all feeling…
    Release the pain,
    Or drown it out…
    Let go…

    We are nothing but a dream
    An illusion our mind believes…
    Demons whisper in my ears…
    But I ignore the lies…
    Angels, they sit on my shoulder…
    Protecting me…
    Telling me to let go…

    Of my hate…
    Of my greed…
    Fight the war…
    Or ignore the blood…
    Let go…

    I want the world to swell with the eternal light of the sun…
    I hope the world would burn within itself killing everything…
    I wish something would save our ignorant souls, take us away…

    The world drowns in sorrow…
    And someday it will burn in flames
    So let go and give into the light…
    We have been betrayed…
    He has left us behind…
    Let go…

    Of what you know…
    Of all your hope…
    Go to sleep…
    And never wake…
    Let go…

    Of everything there is…
    Of believing he will come…
    Let go…
    Of these demons on my shoulder
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    Nice work, fairly short but still extemely powerful. or mabye smller font makes it look short. anyway great work. Keep writing.
     
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    arT saveS

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    It's about the same length as my other works, so it's probably just the font.

    Anyways, thank you. :)
     
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    fallenangel

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    i thought this was really good! :eek:

    this bit was definetly my fav! keep up the good work. i can't wait to see more! ;)
     
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    arT saveS

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    Thank you. :)

    Oh and no problem, I already posted another one. ;)
     
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    Glue

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    Good Job!!! :)
     
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    arT saveS

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    Thank you. :)
     
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    sickcycle

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    wonderful, i absolutely loved it!
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Nice stuff you got written down there.
     
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    Real nice... ^_^
     

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