"Refuse" Keep away from me right now Cause I know what you are It's hard to believe that you've got this far And I hope you realize that I refuse to fight you anymore I refuse to give any ground I can't let myself be run over anymore I won't let myself be drove into the ground By you By you... Shut your fucking trap right now All your words leave me washed out I can't believe you've got me wrong I can see you don't believe that I refuse to fight you anymore I refuse to give you the satisfaction Of running me over anymore I won't let myself be walked upon I can't let you carry on... I REFUSE I DO NOT GIVE MY CONSENT I REFUSE I WILL ACCEPT NO MORE OF YOUR BULLSHIT I WILLINGLY REFUSE GET THE HELL AWAY FROM ME GET THE HELL OUT OF MY FACE LET ME LIVE MY LIFE IN PEACE IS IT TOO MUCH TO ASK TO LET ME FEEL SAFE?!
Nice. It's very ... powerful, hell, it's commanding lol. And I REFUSE to say anything bad about this. -smirks- I had to put that in. It was really good, I've got no complaints.
Admittedly this is most certainly not the best thing I've ever wrote, mainly because I hacked it together in like 10 minutes (literally ), but I swear I'll try harder next time!
fab and rocking! i actually wrote something similar alittle while back. but this is fab. it feels sooo good to let out those frustrations, doesn't it?
Nice. It feels powerful and raw. Sometimes it is easiest to get these out of a 10 minute poem. lol. Great work the only thing i have to pick on is i don't like the verse I mean 6 lines, and only 3 ending words. it ruins the flow.