Ahh. I wrote again lol. I kinda like this one I guess, but it's unfinished. Tell me what you think, and maybe if I should add anything. ------ blood rushing through like a thousand knives screaming voices in the distance as I hear them shrilling I don't like the voices in the black dark whispering my heart starts to shrivel so I won't hear the shattering blood pours out of my vains and I feel the emptiness no more feeling to be real inside of this It's like a tower at the top, i'm at the sweet sweet bottom clouds shower above with a lightening rythm
yeah, if this was expanded it would be fab!!! keep at it cause this looks like it will rock your socks off!