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    arT saveS

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    Ignorant minds, trapped inside a world we don’t understand

    Bowing to gods, leaning on crutches instead of trying to find…

    Truth in what we are, truth in why we’re here

    Following, not leading, dying, not living

    Destroying, not creating, killing, not protecting

    Imperfect we are, but instead of progressing we…

    Keep killing our own kind, running towards self-extinction

    Keep fueling the fire that exploits our race

    Keep indulging in the fact we are here for a reason

    Keep walking away from the ones who need help the most

    Keep spending money on our enemies



    When will we stop confusing right from wrong

    When the world and it’s contents are gone?

    When we blow each other up with bombs of hate.

    When we destroy because our gods said it was ok.



    Searching for the perfect society

    Killing to restore stability

    Raping to fulfill our destiny

    We want control

    We want divinity through science

    Creation through spirituality

    Hope through despair

    Worldwide perfection

    We are all clones of immorality



    Godless and hateful; preying on the weak

    Mindless and ungrateful; falling to eternal sleep

    Praising mediocrity, condemning love towards another

    Defending against a hurricane of hate, sweeping in tidal waves



    When will we stop confusing right from wrong

    When the world and it’s contents are gone?

    When we blow each other up with bombs of hate.

    When we destroy because our gods said it was ok.



    Searching for the perfect society

    Killing to restore stability

    Raping to fulfill our destiny

    We want control

    We want divinity through science

    Creation through spirituality

    Hope through despair

    Worldwide perfection

    We are all clones of immorality
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    WOW,
    This is a subject i feel very strongly on and you have writtin a great poem. This is amazing, some of the best work to me i've seen in a while. I don't know about others but i really feel the message and the power of this poem. Great work.
     
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    bleeding rose

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    This is amazing. You should sing this with a wild band!! I can imagine it already :p
     
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    fallenangel

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    my god,. you took the words right out of my mouth! :eek:

    this is a fantastic write!

    please can i see some more of your work, your sooo talented!!!
     
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    arT saveS

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    Haha, thank you everyone, I appreciate your comments immensly.
     

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