It Will All End In Tears

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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    It Will All End In Tears



    As we cover ourselves with lies
    The truth will never seep out
    This time it’s gonna blow up
    This time I havent got a doubt.

    They’ve been in for so long,
    These rotten feelings and lies,
    They claim this is where they belong,
    You can see them through my eyes.

    Will you keep it inside?
    Will you fight away the fears?
    It doesn’t matter what you do
    It will all end in tears

    Chorus...
    Her face is haunting in my mind
    She never leaves my thoughts
    We will meet in my dreams
    In my dreams she will be caught


    These saline drops of faith
    Roll down my face silently
    Observe, and you'll recognize,
    I’m expressing this hatred less violently.

    And I feel the numbness of a silent tear,
    As it rolls down a naked cheek,
    It falls upon me, all my fears,
    I feel so suddenly weak.

    I see you walking away from me
    If only you would come back
    I’m so lost without you
    My life would turn abstract.

    You fade away in the mist,
    Never turned to see my state,
    I’m trying to hide, I’m going insane,
    I’m drowning in a self made pool of hate.

    Chorus...
    Her face is haunting in my mind
    She never leaves my thoughts
    We will meet in my dreams
    In my dreams she will be caught
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    please reply!!! ^_^
     
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    Messy Marj

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    w00t. Another great poem!
    Keep writing you two. :)
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    You guys make an awsome team. Great stuff. Just awsome. Do you know each other or do this over messenger or something. It is great. Keep going.
     
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    Mr. Benzedrine

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    We just do it over messenger..And thank you very much your compliments mean alot

    There will be much more to come aswell, We write pretty much every night.
     
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    Arhaz

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    We just do it over messenger..And thank you very much your compliments mean alot

    There will be much more to come aswell, We write pretty much every night. [/b][/quote]
    lol...what he says!!!^^^
    thankie!
     
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    El Muerto

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    no comment


    *applause*
     
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    aki*lp

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    nice,very nice infact ^_^
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Awsome poem.
     
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    Friskey™

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    Nice ^_^
     
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    minuteforce

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    i really like it. great work.
     
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    gozorninplat

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    Wow, amazing. Indescribable. I love the title "it will all end in tears." Very nice.
     
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    LP_Freak_2735

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    Wow, I reallllly like that line.
    Amazing work. Keep it up for sure.


    <3
     
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    Linja

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    Wow. I love this, especially the chorus,
    "Her face is haunting in my mind
    She never leaves my thoughts
    We will meet in my dreams
    In my dreams she will be caught"

    I really love this poem, you'd better keep writing, lol. Or else ... I'll ... umm, ... do nothing. Ah, well.... :D
     
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    bleeding rose

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    I think this is one of the best i hav ever read ...theres just so much goin on so much emotion i lov it ! can wait for the next one;) ;)
     
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    Glue

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    Niceee!!! :)
     

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