Am I still breathing Or is this a dream deceiving Everything I ever needed Is bleeding Screaming Free me Sorrowful moan Under the moonlight Scrutinizing howl No love is found I’m still breathing Another thought of death Fucking life has no feelings Keeping me safe, When I wish to be bleeding Bring me the angels Bring me the demons Cut the throat Of anything living Bring me god Bring me Satan Throw them into the abyss And take control Bring me water Bring me fire Curse this creation Of your foul lord Don’t remind me, I’m still breathing Wait for it The day of my dying Still breathing...
me almost speechless! this is really good, with great use of imagery. it is very dark and there is a great feeling of sorrow in this poem. love it... keep it up the writting cause if you can write like this then you are a true poet.
Good job! this is kinda sad and dark, but i liked the way you expressed this human emotions. i really liked it and i hope to read more of your stuff. keep it up!!!