"You, Yeah You" It's been two fucking months and I still feel the same, We've been here before and went our seperarte ways But we've ended up here together, All alone, I should know better. And you know how I feel, I know you're looking good, I've bounced back quickly, But I knew that I would. It's been a few fucking days and you still hate him, You don't want to be friends, listen to me Kim, I'm sure that he meant no harm, Or he did, he was tryin' to hurt you please stay calm. And you know how I feel, I know you're looking good, I've bounced back quickly, But I knew that I would. I should know that by 2 weeks, You'll be back with him and he'll be kissing your cheeks, And you'll foget everything you've said, I'll be reminding you, you wished that he was dead. Your friends have asked, if I'll ask you out, Well in my mind, a guy's the last thing you'll want, Your friends have asked, if I'll ask you out, Well in my mind, a guy's the last thing you'll want. And you know how I feel, I know you're looking good, I've bounced back quickly, But I knew that I would.
hey, i've never seen anything like this before on writers cove. good work! you know what's funny? that this really happens on real life, and unfortunately, sometimes it happens often. I can't believe the awareness people have been showing here. Congrats, keep it up!
It is interesting and it feels very loud and in your face which i like because it is not the sort of poem we're getting around here much. The rhyming doesnt feel forced and it had a good flow. there is not much you can do to improve other than to keep writing an just get better from practice. Great work