Ok. another one. this one sort of goes to a tune which is like Part of me from Hybrid thery EP, but faster. anyway. another one which i sort of vomited from my mind.(Good old AhamLP's quote) so hope you enjoy. Been Bugged by Hate There’s something deep within me Buried inside my soul, I can feel it there like a bug, Eating me away from the inside, Slowly destroying me, my memories, And everything that’s part of me, Destroying the person I am, So slowly I can barley feel it happening It’s something I created long ago, The result of doubt, fear and rage, Concentrated into one form, That has power over me And the longer I keep it, The stronger it becomes, And the longer I leave it, The more I need it, What sort of person wouldn’t throw away, Something that’s about to kill them, But for some reason I don’t want to, It’s now a part of me, And I fear that if I loose it, It will take away some of me, I fear that I might need it to live, Oh god I’m an addict to my own hate, So I’ll hold on to this bug, Just as every human seems to do, To scared to let it go, Even if it’s the thing that’s killing you, Why can’t I bring myself to take it out, But it would just feel like I’m killing myself, So I’ll leave it in there and endure all the pain, And watch myself die, because I’m an addict to hate.
love it! god i hope i get as good as you!this is an emotion i can identify with and i am sure many others do to.
awesome, man! I just became an addict to you poems . great work, really deep and human. God damn it! what is it that we are all writing about hate? lol. I really liked this one. everyday you just make me love your stuff more than ever. Good job!
Yer i know. But i mean, when you look at how many people are abbused, homeless, how much domestic violence, how we discriminate people. Look at the people who are rich and on top. More often than not they are the people who exploited every means possible and pushed everyone aside. (reffer to where is the love - black eyed peas for more on what i'm saying) Our sosiety is survival of the fittest even today. And the ones who are kind get left behind. How can we not see this world of "HATE"
Yer i know. But i mean, when you look at how many people are abbused, homeless, how much domestic violence, how we discriminate people. Look at the people who are rich and on top. More often than not they are the people who exploited every means possible and pushed everyone aside. (reffer to where is the love - black eyed peas for more on what i'm saying) Our sosiety is survival of the fittest even today. And the ones who are kind get left behind. How can we not see this world of "HATE" [/b][/quote] yeah, i agree totally. i was just saying it was a coincidence or something, but now that you mention it, imagine the writers cove without "hate" poems. well, i'm not trying to make fun of all those people you just mentioned. i know it is painful to write about it but necessary at the same time. I just hope that word gets erased from world's vocabulary someday.
yeah, i agree totally. i was just saying it was a coincidence or something, but now that you mention it, imagine the writers cove without "hate" poems. well, i'm not trying to make fun of all those people you just mentioned. i know it is painful to write about it but necessary at the same time. I just hope that word gets erased from world's vocabulary someday. [/b][/quote] And what a beautiful day that would be
Man what pen do you use,I asked what pen do u use to write such stuff,I guess I will write such great poems with that pen :whistle: ,anyways the poem is awesome,as one can see now its become awesome = David and David = awesome,keep writing and yeah as you had said that I had said nobody can escape mind' vommit and after tasting your mind's vommit*,I feel it tastes great,keep writing. *those who are wondering what is this mind's vommit,its the vommit of a person mind whose ingrediants are hate,love and anything and everything in the form of letters and words.
Thanks, these are very kind words. That pen will be available when i start D_A_V_I_D Underground. LOL. Hope to start anotherone soon.
DAMN THATS A NICE ONE kinda like a thought in the back of ur head, going in front and back all the time of non-stop slikes its a perfect one to put in my room, and most of our rooms! siggy added!