you all used to laugh at me bully me, taunt me but what you gonna do now cause you can' touch me cause i'm better than that now the anger you produced pushed me far i'm glad cause it's made me who i am a much stronger person who can cope with life's bitches cause i have new hope another early poem that just came out!
short but nice. Keep up the good work. i think there are a few errors in the writing of it so check that out. Good job.
cool,you seem a better short poem writer than a long one(lol this is just a comment),but the poem has more to say then it seems to say,its emotional and I could relate to a few lines to my own life.thanx
thanks. cause i am just starting out short poems are easier to get an emotion out but i think, in time, i will be able to write longer stuff. practice makes perfect, eh?
yeah, i agree. it's short, but it has a meaning and you make your point. You are starting to show emotions better . that's great, keep it up!