Something my boyfriend wrote to me

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    FreeYourMind

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    Around 2 am this morning I heard someone knock on my window, trowing stones,acutually. I got up and looked who was there, no one was.
    So i went down and on our door matt there was this hand written poem and 3 white roses on it! It reminded me of the movies. It was really the sweetest thing. He wrote it because there was a time when we like 'broke up' but we are back 2gether now. :)

    Here's the poem

    You and I under the sun.

    The sea swallows my hidden waves op pain
    I see the tears cross your face
    There's nothing we can gain
    Trough this love and we will.

    Everyday we stand under the red sun
    We stand, but a mile apart
    You not knowing me, my prescense is unoticed
    Just like when it Begun.

    I wish you could love me
    Give everything you could
    So my dreams would end today
    And live life in reality as it should

    Now that you love me
    My life is filled with bliss
    I never want to loose you
    Or all my life within in me will die

    Love remains and panic strikes
    I will love you more than anyone
    We will walk the green country forever
    Cause you and I have become One
     
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    [Th3 Wkng De@d]

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    Wow...tell him that he is a good poet.
     
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    aki*lp

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    Wow...usually I am not the mushy type of a person, but this is really good!
     
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    [Th3 Wkng De@d]

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    Me neither. But yeah, it's good.
     
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    Il inno di morte

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    I agree ;)
     
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    Theazninvasion68

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    thats a really good poem, hes a pretty good poet too i suppose
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    Me neither. But yeah, it's good. [/b][/quote]
    sam here but that is awsome
     

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