Give Up Giving Up

Here is a poem that I wrote though the original title is "Give Up Giving Up", but I have kept it another title "Middle Finger 24/7",dunno just felt this title would be more strong and vocal,and here is the poem and as usual comments please and tell me which title you liked most.


"Give Up Giving Up"/"Middle Finger 24/7"


Days may come days may go
you may be on a high or on a low
but one thing you should know
that you are not here to bow


There may be times when you felt let down
when a flood of pain came and you felt you would drown
when something bugged you and made you frown
but if you stay strong tough times come and in no time are gone


So you feel the whole world is upon you
trying to crush you underneath
snatching everything that you have
but don't worry you still have your middle finger to give


Everybody may say you are incompetent
that you are a real dumb and idiot
but don't even pay attention to them and accept defeat
'cause the only thing you gotta give up is your give up attitude

 

a much lighter poem than some of your previous but i like it.

Didnt feel u were tryin to hard to rhyme this time.

EDIT: lol mabye cause u didnt except the first versus. but anyway. good stuff

Congrats

 

Not bad. Keep up the good work.

 

Hey! great work! simple, but deep. congrats man! and I'd stay with "Middle Finger 24/7" reminds me of Figure.09 lol but I belive this is a good title. I like it more than "Give Up Giving Up", but it's just my humble opinion.