This is one of my first poems that i wrote for our poetry topic in english last year. again it goes to a tune that u obviously dont know. so i hope you all really like it. I feel a chilly breeze on my neck, As I’m walking down the street. All I want is for someone to be here, Someone to be with me. It feels as if the whole world hates me, But someone tell me why. God, why do I deserve this? Why does the sun never shine? Some times I sit in the shadows, Just sit there crying, All I want is a shoulder to cry on, Just don’t wanna be alone. Sometimes I feel like a ghost, Cause no one sees me. Everyone just, Walks right through me. But then one day I see her smiling, Smiling straight at me. I look behind me But there’s no one there. I turn back, to smile at her, But she’s already gone. She’s been sucked back up, From the grey world she came from. Though she’s gone her smiles still with me, And as I remember. The light breaks through the clouds, Destroying the darkness, dwelling inside me Now I’m not a ghost, But a man, whose seen an angel. She’s freed the spirit that was dormant inside me, I’m finally free to live.
Cool,I just loved this poem though you told this was one of your first poems,it still as if you are a poet from a long time,great work and I really liked these lines,they are just the best and so are you,keep it up,why am I not like you :whistle:
O-H M-Y G-O-D!!!! Way to go, pal! I really liked this poem, I kinda feel identified... and about the age, who cares!!!! the only thing that matters is you got some real talent, and in this case, age is not important. Very well done!