Tears Form in the Eyes of the Innocent

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    arT saveS

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    When children are crying because there fathers are dead...
    It's gone to far.


    no peace in a world based on hate
    people driven by grudges, depression and despair
    need time to recupperate from the minds of morons
    to someday tear out the thorns
    tha causes the bleeding in our innocent world

    we observe eachother and dispose of the different
    attempting to make our never-land, never-perfect world...
    PERFECT

    we will create a new world, from old world substance
    peace and love, a new essence
    I'm ready for the fall of mankind
    and the rise of a more complex system

    we observe eachother and dispose of the different
    attempting to make our never-land, never-perfect world...
    PERFECT

    war and murder, the result of a failure
    no harmony in a world controlled by the unjust
    a brotherhood of murderers
    designed to create an uprising of sadness
    to create our own downfall

    save yourself
    because no one else will
    for that is what we are all about
    no happiness in a world based on greed
    people trying to save themselves

    maybe this world needs the destruction
    to kill off this hatred
    but this wasnt part of the plan...
    forcing life to adopt a new habit
    the impossible: love and caring
    on a care free planet

    we observe eachother and dispose of the different
    attempting to make our never-land, never-perfect universe...
    PERFECT

    tears form in eyes of the innocent
    i hope the sadness of children,
    forces murder down the throat of the government
     
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    Testament

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    Wow... :eek:
     
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    arT saveS

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    Good or bad wow?
     
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    Testament

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    Great wow. as in powerful and moving. Great job. ;)
     
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    Thanks. :)
     
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    Yea great job! It may inspire to get out the old quill and start writing lyrics again :shifty:
     
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    arT saveS

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    Ohh, I'm an inspiration! Thanks, Jeff. :D
     
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    LornVourkolakas

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    I'm starting to like you as a writer. The bolded part is my favorite from this one. Good job.
     
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    Thank you very much. :)
     
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    Il inno di morte

    Il inno di morte A noi si schiude il ciel...

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    I agree totally. Nice work buddy, you've got some real talent! :D
     
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    Thank you.
     

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