2 poems by me

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    Why Don't You Care

    Another time i've been lied to,
    Why don't you care,
    You never meant anything,
    Why don't you care,
    I'm disillusioned with love,
    Why don't you care,
    Am I a way to pass time,
    Why don't you care,
    Poisoned with your lies,
    Why don't you care,
    I'm forever scarred,
    Why don't you care,
    You used me,
    Why don't you care.

    Announce Your Anger

    This is an announcement,
    To everyone I hate,
    Don't screw with my mind,
    When will you learn,
    Burn when i'm angry,
    I've spat on you again,
    I don't need you,
    Enjoy your clever lines,
    As I laugh in your face,
    You are the walking dead.

    thats it, i'm more of a song writer, but these are a couple of my attempts at being a poet lol, wonder what you all think of them.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

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    I like "Why don't you care''.
     
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    hYbr1d_tH30rY_723

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    I like both of them actaully ... there really good
     

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