The loving enemy My love can cure your pain In doubt? Do you fear it? Do you find comfort here Do you find comfort within… Do you fear being loved And in your darkest moments I’ll be here As the light to guide you to happiness My love can cure your pain In doubt? Do you fear it Do you find comfort here Do you find comfort within… Do you find comfort in pain Do you find comfort in my pain Do you find comfort in the crying The crying of my eyes Do you find comfort… Do you find comfort… Do you find comfort within… The loving enemy The loving enemy The enemy The enemy The enemy I’ve never hidden from you I’ve never run away I’ve never done anything to hurt you Why do you wish to hurt me, When all I do is love you The Meaningless Love The meaningless love The feverish lust The boiling hate Of life that lifts our hearts together And chokes them Chokes them until they are nothing The meaningless love This world is so cruel Fuck you and Fuck your lies and Fuck this life that Will bury me when I die I don’t want my life Take it away The creator Means nothing to me Fuck god, fuck everything Fuck this life It’s a cavity I don’t want my life Just take it away Fuck you and Fuck your lies and Fuck this life that Will bury me when I die My right… I don’t want my life The meaningless love (It heals) The meaningless love (It kills) The meaningless love The meaningless love Love is only memories and feelings The need to protect another person A passion to love and hold another The meaningless love Satan die geht masse Hiding in the shadows under the sun Fall from the earth with no where to run Enemy, the liar, grip the truth and keep hold Before lies consume and your soul is sold Crippling reveries are taking place His chaotic escape I’ve lost the faith Fall from the earth to the hell Cast into the darkness, a hellish realm Fall from the heaven unto the hell And follow the beautiful angel that once fell… Into light Into gold A story is told Life of a man with no one to hold Bruised and beaten until life forced him to fold Collapsed under a spell, this part of the story untold Life of a man whose heart grew cold as stone Thrown out of his perfect home Mirror spits out a familiar face Creased with wrinkles, yet perfected, create… The blood that flows and boils inside our veins A fact, a window of this hate That swells inside my already chosen fate Fall from the earth to the hell And be cast into the darkness, his hellish realm I’ll turn my back on the heaven to receive the hell And follow the beautiful angel who once fell… Into darkness The crippling hate Fumes of love ventilate As the hate escalates Life of a man with only one to hold Bruised, beaten, forced to fold Life of a man who’s heart soars Chose a different path so the heart began to mold I escape from this bullshit world Clutch the truth and never let go Clutch the belief and choke until blood swells from the throat And as the fires burn and the cries ignite Scream out your fears and face the light Swallow your peace and fall within Hold on as you give birth to sin Exhale slowly and silently breath in The scent of evil blooms, Evil becomes your home again A story is told Life of a man with no one to hold Love failed him Life left him Bruised and beaten until life forced him to fold Thrown out of his perfect home Hated and despised he now chases the thrown Story of a man who cannot die and does not grow old I I… Cry And I’ll… Die I live I breathe… In sin I feed Just like you I… Am flesh And blood And bone And if my loved ones die I’ll… Cry And if my loved one leaves I’ll… Die Now I live But it’s a sad life. I cry. I… Cry. I dream. I… Dream. I love. I… LOVE. I bleed. I… BLEED. I fail. I… Failed…
No one is the same. Not everyone will like what I write, and I'm perfectly fine with it. I believe what I wrote is fine, so I won't change any of it, but I do appreciate the responses.
Yeha I agree With Danny...You're Too Repetitive..And Danny DiD Write A Better Song its Called Look into The Mirroer..Check it Out Its Really Good
OK, I don't know what everyone's deal is, but the Satan one is really damn good, I love the opening "Hiding in the shadows under the sun Fall from the earth with no where to run Enemy, the liar, grip the truth and keep hold Before lies consume and your soul is sold Crippling reveries are taking place His chaotic escape I’ve lost the faith" Absolutly love that part, infact the whole song/poem is very sound. Now the "I" one is a bit repetitive, but its not totally "sucky". I like the style, its diferent and I aplaud you for that, but yes, you do need to work on putting some more words in there to make it have a less perpetual feel.