I Hate Realised how much I hate you, All the pain you put me through, This has gone too far, you need to burn, You only die once, that’s the lesson you must learn, This battle’s just begun, This battle’s just begun, I HATE! All the things you say, I HATE! The apathy you lay, I HATE! The things you do, I HATE! What I go through, Realised that I’m so much colder, Look in the mirror and feel so much older, Fighting with you never seems to end, Laugh because you used to be my friend, This battle’s just begun, This battle’s just begun, I HATE! All the things you say, I HATE! The apathy you lay, I HATE! The things you do, I HATE! What I go through, (The battle’s just begun) I HATE! All the things you say, I HATE! The apathy you lay, I HATE! The things you do, I HATE! What I go through, You start your games again, I swear I’ll break it, You start your games again, I’m no longer gonna sit and take it, Shut up, Shut up, Shut up, SHUT UP! I HATE! All the things you say, I HATE! The apathy you lay, I HATE! The things you do, I HATE! What I go through. I Look in Your Eyes and I Cry I look in your eyes and I cry, Why does this hurt so much (hurt so much), I look in you eyes and I cry, Why does this hurt so much? As we meet again, I think what I’ve done wrong, I don’t wanna hurt you, but that’s what I’ve done all along, I’ve done all along, I look in your eyes and I cry, Why does this hurt so much? I look in you eyes and I cry, Why does this hurt so much? Should I apologise, What more can I do, Would the pain lessen, If I cut myself and hurt, You deserve so much more than me, But yet you say you’re happy, I look in your eyes and I cry, Why does this hurt so much? I look in you eyes and I cry, Why does this hurt so much? Yeah, yeah, I look in your eyes and I cry, Why does this hurt so much? I look in you eyes and I cry, Why does this hurt so much? You deserve so much more than me, But yet you say you’re happy, You deserve so much more than me, But yet you say you’re happy, Yeah it’s time, time to… I look in your eyes and I cry, Why does this hurt so much? I look in you eyes and I cry, Why does this hurt so much? Yeah, yeah, I look in your eyes and I cry, Why does this hurt so much? I look in you eyes and I cry, Why does this hurt so much? Yeah, it hurts so much.
wow... I love them both. Well written with good structure. I hope I'll get to see more of your work sometime
Ouch . I hope nothing that actually happened brought those songs on . They are good though . Especially if you give them music as well as you have written them.