Break Away

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    Phantasm

    Phantasm Well-Known Member

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    I wrote this because lately my dad and myself have been avoiding speaking to each other, possibly because of the fact that I'm now a young adult (I'm 22) and he's my old man and he always wanted me, his little boy, to be just like him. Now, I have my own mind and my own views on certain things and he can't accept that, or doesn't want to. I am, if you will, 'breaking away' from him, in that I don't necessarily want to be just like him, and in other ways as well. Sorry Dad, if I turned out the wrong way, but...kids grow up and become their own people, there's not much you can do.

    "Break Away"

    Feeling so nervous, put under the spotlight
    I never wanted to become you
    I wanted to become me with my own life
    But it's like God forbid I should express myself
    Because if I did that I'd be someone else
    And you can't accept the fact
    That I just might want to break away
    You always wanted me to be just like you
    But now that I'm older I can see
    That it's never like I thought it would be

    Let me break away
    I want to be myself
    Let me break away
    I want the freedom to express
    All these thoughts and fears
    That I've felt deep within all these years
    Just let me break away

    I feel this world shrinking smaller
    A little more each and every day
    And you can't it face it all at once cause
    I'm breaking away and branching away
    And despite what you could and will say
    I sincerely doubt that I could hope to be like you
    And maybe someday I'll look back on this
    And reflect that you were in the right
    But that's far away and this is now
    Give me the reins to control my life

    I'm asking you to let me break away
    I want to be my own person
    Just let me break away
    I promise you I'll do all I can do
    To make this whole life worth it

    Let me break away
    I want to be myself
    Let me break away
    I want the freedom to express
    All these thoughts and fears
    That I've felt deep within all these years
    Just let me break away
     
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    esaul17

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    Now bad, but the first verse seeed a little bit cliched.
     
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    Amanda

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    were you inspired by Linkin Park - Numb? because i get the same feel
     
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    sickcycle

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    Yeah it's alot like "Numb", but that's not a bad thing. First verse as already stated, is cliche, but the rest is good, good flow and so on, I liked it man; sorry about your dad and all.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    It's not bad sounds really good.

    P.S maybe you can work it out with your dad.
     

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