Shut Up,Shut Up

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by a life in ashes, Feb 10, 2005.

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    Shut Up,Shut Up

    We once were friends,
    But now we fight,
    It's not too late to apologise,
    If we fight you will lose,
    It's time to choose,

    Shut up,Shut up,
    No-one cares,
    Fighting face to face,
    You wouldn't dare,
    Right now you'll bleed,

    What a shock,
    You're lost and cold,
    The insults you throw out,
    They're so damn old,
    The apathy we have,
    When you lose i'll laugh,

    Shut up,Shut up,
    No-one cares,
    Fighting face to face,
    You wouldn't dare,
    Right now you'll bleed

    Stand and fight,
    Or get outta here,

    Shut up,Shut up,
    No-one cares,
    Fighting face to face,
    You wouldn't dare,
    Right now you'll bleed

    Right now you'll bleed,
    So say goodbye...

    Written in memory of my friend for two years and who now hates my guts, for no reason at all.
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    i'd say..better...can still be complicated..got a touch of nu metal, i like it...and i feel i'm mutating into Simon...
    what the hell!? i'm not brilliant myself!
    good stuff!
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

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    It sounds good. Nice job
     
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    lofton0788

    lofton0788 Well-Known Member

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    a little awkward structure but good never-the-less
     

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