Hey Everyone ive just recently started writing lyrics for my band, I just thought id post to see what you all think Red Eye Rats. Give in without a fight You know it's not right The kids rule the fucking night The future looked so bright Back when we were kids Who you trying to kid!? But thats beside the point The point was used to haunt These streets are fucking up The resovouirs filled with toxic We swim without any luck Is this anxiety or am I hallucinating The river plagues the streets the cities de-hydrating ---------------------------------------------------- Six feet Deep I saw a man prowl in the street The next day I saw him six feet deep A handful of people mourn in a field They call this a funeral I call it underestimation If one lacks wealth some lacks relevance In this case it was typical, typical for a being to be ignored Conservative thoughts are thoughts of theirs Why the fuck should we care Line them up and cut our tax Just lower their heads and bring the axe From The Cradle To The Grave Victims round up slaved From The Cradle To The Grave Victims round up and slaved They talk of wonderful oppertunity But most are myths or legandgry Some take their work for granted But work isn't so free or handed ---------------------------------------------- Seventh Saint I can't through the barrier The obstacles are getting harder I think I could just make a break But the wind is getting stronger and my feet might just leave ground Through and through we keep going further But they'll find me in the end I'm the seventh saint from the northern gate and I might just not be true Everytime they talk about me the mood swings turn turn a peak or take a sudden grow If you wanna make a step then the step better be back Cause you just find your end Why would I wanna make you end? Well I can and thats just fine by me Are you fucking with the system cause if you are your fucking with me Stick to the road - Stick to the road - If you want me to post more just say, But i thought that would do for now. Thanks
Excellent.But have you written the music for this.I write the lyrics for my band but i generally do that when the music is written.if you can manage without the music it is absolutely fine
Yeah they all have music to them, If you want ill send you Red Eye Rats over MSN, Thats the only one i have on my comp
ok good.I'll give you my MSN id.by the way what is the name of your band? [/b][/quote] 12 Pointless Days