What We Could Be

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    Dedicated

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    "What We Could Be"

    Being right never felt so wrong,
    Just another day just another song,
    A thank-you note for helping me see,
    I don't need you and you don't need me,
    And this isn't giving up,
    I'm sorry I've just had enough,
    A few more dreams kicked around,
    Kicked around and broken down.

    What are you doing?
    I thought you hated me,
    But now you're so close,
    "Look at what we could be,"
    You've used those lines,
    Too many times,
    And I've fallen for them,
    Over and over again.

    What's going through your head?
    When I think about everthing you've said,
    Are these really mixed up signals,
    Or are you in denial that I'm the one for you?

    What are you doing?
    I thought you hated me,
    But now you're so close,
    "Look at what we could be,"
    You've used those lines,
    Too many times,
    And I've fallen for them,
    Over and over again.

    Just another song,
    Written about a girl,
    Just another song,
    Written about you.

    What are you doing?
    I thought you hated me,
    But now you're so close,
    "Look at what we could be,"
    You've used those lines,
    Too many times,
    And I've fallen for them,
    Over and over again.

    Yesterday you told me you need some time,
    You don't just fall in love at first sight,
    Which is strange 'cause I don't too,
    But I've spent so much time lusting for you.

    What are you doing?
    I thought you hated me,
    But now you're so close,
    "Look at what we could be,"
    You've used those lines,
    Too many times,
    And I've fallen for them,
    Over and over again.
     
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    Arhaz

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    i totally love it!
    it's perfect! ^_^
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Good rhymes.
     
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    ChooseYourPoison

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    Dave, you suck.

    (I mean that as a compliment)
     
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    Jon[athan]

    Jon[athan] Sincerly, written from my brothers blood machine.

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    i like it ^_^ . good job
     
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    NofxPants

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    That's great, very well done!
     
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    Friskey™

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    Wow...good stuff!
     
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    matttheskwirl14

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    you do because you can do better than many people i know

    nice job keep it up
     
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    Dedicated

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    Wow. Thanks so much for the replies :)
     
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    Luke

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    Great stuff as always man! :)
     
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    Dedicated

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    Thanks alot :)
     

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