The Simple Plan Girl

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    Will

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    This has got to be my favorite piece of work...ever. It's supposed to be performed like one of those really fast-paced hardcoreish screamo songs where the vocalist sings the verses really fast, almost like he's rapping...but isn't.

    "The Simple Plan Girl"

    Look at how she’s actin’ like she’s got it so bad
    Goin’ through a list of every boyfriend that she’s had
    She complains all the time that she don’t get what she wants
    Yeah, I can see how that’d be true by the way that she flaunts
    She’s got her Simple Plan shirt with her T-B-S patch
    Goes around screamin’ ‘bout how all the boys are trash
    But she doesn’t seem to mind when one’s got her on her back
    Screamin’ so loud that you think she’d been attacked
    Woah, and as the C-D player skips to “Cute Without the ‘E’”
    She jumps up and screams ‘bout how she went to see
    Taking Back Sunday when they were on the Warped Tour
    How she swears the lead singer looked at her right before
    He started to belt out a melody that was oh-so-sweet
    Right before he jumped off stage and swept her off her feet
    But I slapped that crazy bitch in the face and just said
    “If you don’t shut the fuck up, you’re gonna’ end up dead”

    Woah, can you see her
    Makin’ a scene
    Out of every little thing?
    Do you believe her
    Reppin’ the scene
    Hah, like it’s her everything?

    Her new boyfriend’s wearin’ his A-X-Seven shirt today
    Wonder what that crazy bitch is gonna’ have to say?
    “Oh, how can you listen to that? All they do is scream
    I don’t know how you can know what they mean”
    She doesn’t understand that it’s not about the vocals
    It’s not about music that’s processed in Pro Tools
    It’s about the fuckin’ breakdowns and the fuckin’ mosh
    And buyin’ those indie records on the corner at the Shop
    As she’s headin’ to her locker I can hear her stop to say
    How she’s gonna’ break up with her B-F after school today
    So I walked up to her and asked her the reason why
    “Because he listens to music that doesn’t even try”
    I looked her in the eye and started to raise my hand
    But then I thought better of it so I took a stand
    “So what the hell is Simple Plan? All they do is whine
    Cryin’ about their broken skateboards all the God damn time”
    Then it looked like the stupid girl was gonna’ cry
    When her hero boyfriend walked over just in time
    But with Underoath in his pocket he looked at me and said
    “Thanks to you, she’s not gonna’ end up dead”

    Woah, can you see her
    Makin’ a scene
    Out of every little thing?
    Do you believe her
    Reppin’ the scene
    Hah, like it’s her everything?

    So this is the part where the song gets crazy
    The guitars break down and the vocals aren’t lazy
    The Simple Plan girl gets up, runs to the stereo
    Skips to the next C-D and proclaims: “There we go!
    Music that doesn’t suck and you can understand!”
    Suddenly I heard Good Charlotte playin’ in my head
    I couldn’t believe the shit that just happened
    This can’t be real, I don’t fuckin’ understand it
    How can this girl be so God damn naïve?
    Music isn’t about the fuckin’ vocals, you see
    But since the only thing that she’s ever known is emo
    Hopefully soon she’s gonna graduate to screamo
    Then she’d understand that the vocals aren’t it
    Fuck Simple Plan: I was up above it, now I’m down in it

    Woah, can you see her
    Makin’ a scene
    Out of every little thing?
    Do you believe her
    Reppin’ the scene
    Hah, like it’s her everything?

    Woah, can you see her
    Makin’ a scene
    Out of every little thing?
    Do you believe her
    Reppin’ the scene
    Hah, like it’s her everything?
     
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    Matt

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    Damnit Will! I was going to post something like that later! :lol: I have to say that you wrote on that concept wayyyyyyy better,though. Nice work. :thumbsup:
     
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    Will

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    Haha. I just wrote it. It took me, like, ten minutes. :lol: Thanks a lot, though. I really, really like this one. I've had that chorus in my head for weeks now and I finally got to use it. :lol:
     
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    LMAO
     
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    :lol:
     
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    This is far better then many of the songs I've read on here and heard on the radio. I love the sarcasm throughout the entire thing lol.
     
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    HAHA, Pretty cool.
     
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    I swear you have some kind of illness that enhances your lyical ability :lol:

    I love it,good as always Will,well done man 10/10

    Its actualy amazing how similar these lyrics are to the ones I've been working on,I guess you beat me and a whole lot more other people to it :lol:
     
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    :lol: aaah that was a good laugh

    Good job Will! I really like this one :)
     
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    :mellow: wow... (w00t) lol i really like that. thats really sweet. but its true. way too many ppl look at how the lyrics are sang [or screamed]. and they dont look any farther. really nice piece of work here. :)
     
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    Nice lyrics.
     
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    very cool Will ^_^
     
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    Very Awesome and Amazingly Funny!
     
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    Will

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    Thanks for all the comments. ^_^
     
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    That made me laugh so hard.

    In a good way.
     
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    If it weren't 1 in the morning I would've been laughing hysterically. I know a girl exactly like that and she annoys the fuck out of me. I'm tempted to print this off for her and slip it in her locker or something.. :lol:
     
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    :eek:









    That's all I've got to say. Brilliant work
     
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    Thanks. :)
     

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