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Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by chaosblade, Jan 22, 2005.

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    chaosblade

    chaosblade Well-Known Member

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    chaosblade, Jan 22, 2005



    Well, Here's my second attempt at poetry. Decided to share this one aswell as i got alot of positive feedback on my first.

    Comments, as always, are welcome.

    :: http://www.deviantart.com/view/14390822/ ::
     
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    sickcycle

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    sickcycle, Jan 23, 2005



    very nice, good job, a little bit of a flow problem in the beginning, but over all very good
     

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