slipped away part 2 Why is this girl falling deeper then any other pain ever i the world?shes fake to others this fairy is just fading fading fading away away away from herself and others tht made her slipped away away away from the rainbow tht cause happiness to all other fairys but now she trapped in vines tht is her pain now she 3 feet in water now like a river height of water the water are her tears she drifted away away away from them she out of reach no one could save her !!!!!! she gone from the reach there touch there voice and she's out of reach from dreams she fading fading fading away away away she try to battle pain with happy but was no work she disappearing from man-kind where is she? we can't find her is this true is she really gone from touch from reach from dreams from pain? where she? she's going she is nothing just a figment of memory the others fairys try to forget her just because she wasn't a happy fairy she wasn't perfect she was unique she was differnet she liked to fly while the other didn't like the pigment of the sky they hated she didn't she loved it the joy of flying the wind in her face but then one day she just disappeared to no where................ she was never the quiet one she had the urges to sing her little heart out or to read her poems or storys or sing her songs of pain to others whom started to realize tht they have ben causing her great pain but she is gone we found her in a ditch but she then was coverd in vines and she was crying and then she was in a 1in of water then two later she was in 3 feet water then a 5 days later she was river height water she was trapped i tryed to save her but her power was to strong i could i felt like she wanted this pain we would visit her but i was the only one who could hear her thoughts so i kinda spoke for her then one day she said leave me here in my pain i caused to myself to help my self to a better way to live up there with you other fairys amongst you all so i was only visiting now these day but she now has ben taking step to coming to the surrfec to get to see her life laid before her now but she now knows locking them away away away is doing harm to others and herself but she now has started to cry when need to be angry when need to be sad when need so now the vines the water the kinve are gone shes free from pain she now need to be more of a person then a whimp to her anger and other emotions she won this battle to be free she free from the vines knives and the water from her tears before she is FREE FOR EVER she now has a life with friends. by,lpp deicated to my friends at the lpalliance thnks
this is really funny to read out loud in different accents other then that, the lyrics need to be fixed cos the sentences I read were kinda weird sometimes. and try to make a nice lay out of your poem so people will read it faster when it actually looks like a poem. and please use dots.
should I be afraid then, when you are in a bad mood? I was joking. but really, try to write correctly, you´ll get more replies on your work if you do.