Final Explaination I'm slipping I can't stop pacing Pacing, pacing, forever Nervous, anxious, blessed Insanity rules my mind Leaving this world behind Back and forth over and over again Thinking constantly Can't stop Shaking, silently screaming Bleeding crimson cries For the end of life
i liked it, 6.9/10 [best score i have ever given was a 9.6, think of my scoring system as that of IMDB]. A wee bit short, but gets the job done in record time for those people with short attintion spans. Kinda creepy, could be cooler if you adden in things the person was hearing, seeing, feeling, and so on; that really emerses the reader into the story. But its still very good for being so short, like i said, good job.