You look at me like nothing's wrong You say everything will be ok But I know it wont be long Before you go back on what you say I know whats wrong with me I know its killing me from inside But for the sake of being with you I'll hold the tears I hide I feel it in my heart I feel it in my veins I feel it in my mind It will never go away I feel it in my bones I feel it like it's pain I feel it in my blood It's here everyday No more looking into your vacant eyes No more listening to all your lies I have a cancer I am death in disguise And the cancer is you The cancer is love (I feel it inside,its eatin' me alive) The cancer is loving you too much The cancer is love I lay here to find you On the other side of bed Even when you say you love me I still remember what you said I know whats wrong with you Its killing you from inside I know what you're going through But we can't live side by side There is nothing in my heart There is nothing in my veins I feel I've lost my mind I feel this everyday I feel it in my voice I feel it like it's pain I feel so lifeless I think I've gone insane No more looking into your vacant eyes No more listening to all your lies I have a cancer I am death in disguise And the cancer is you The cancer is love (I feel it inside,its eatin' me alive) The cancer is loving you too much The cancer is love I love the way you smile I love your golden hair I love your blue eyes So why is life unfair I love how you talk I love your personality I love the way you look So why is life unfair I feel it in my heart (I love you too much) I feel it in my veins (I love you too much) I feel it in my mind (I love you too much) It will never go away (You are so beautiful) I feel it in my bones (I love you so much) I feel it like it's pain (I love you too much) I feel it in my blood (I love you way too much) It's here everyday No more looking into your vacant eyes No more listening to all your lies I have a cancer I am death in disguise And the cancer is you The cancer is love (I feel it inside,its eatin' me alive) The cancer is loving you too much The cancer is love The cancer is love The cancer is love I just love you way too much The cancer is love
What the fuck? :wth: ...I'm gonna disregard that. Anyways, nice poem/song, I really like it. Really good writing and stuff, keep up the good work Prophecy
What the fuck? :wth: ...I'm gonna disregard that. Anyways, nice poem/song, I really like it. Really good writing and stuff, keep up the good work Prophecy [/b][/quote] Yeah what is the tacos statement about? Thanks for the comment though.By the way if your gonna shorten the name then its hellflame any other comments anyone?
I really like it. It's quite long, I normally don't like long poems/songs, but this one is nice. Keep it up. And don't mind Kotrunks, he's weird sometimes :wth:
in no way does your breaking up with your girlfriend even slightly compare to a loved one dying of cancer. this song offended me.
...I don't think you get the point of his song. It really doesn't say anywhere that I can find anything about a loved one dying of cancer.
...I don't think you get the point of his song. It really doesn't say anywhere that I can find anything about a loved one dying of cancer. [/b][/quote] i know it doesn't, but he's calling his girlfriend's love a cancer. he doesn't know what cancer is and shouldnt be writing about it.
i know it doesn't, but he's calling his girlfriend's love a cancer. he doesn't know what cancer is and shouldnt be writing about it. [/b][/quote] Calm down, man. I think he just means his girlfriend's love has a strong effect, as would cancer on a cancer patient. It's just an anaology. (I don't think I spelt that right)--^
I like this song the best out of your work so far. [This says allot!] Any way Solxfyr, take a pill go sit on a hill, and chill like an eel. I seriously doubt Hellflame wanted to offend you, probably doesn’t even know you had someone close to you die of cancer, even if he does, I cant see how this song offends you. You had someone die, I am sorry [I just had two grandparents die back to back last year], but if I posted one of my poems about death, would it offend you?
Number1: When I say a cancer I'm using a different term for illness,it's actualy got nothing to do with me but its about a real life experience that I know someone went through.My description of love in this song is that its making the person sick because he can't get over how beautiful this girl is and no advice or cure will ever let him get over it. Number 2:I do indeed know what cancer is but in these set of lyrics show me where I've used the term cancer,all I see is using the term a cancer similar but a whole different thing. Number 3:Using a complex of love being a cancer can in no shape or form be referring to a viral cancer. Number 4:I'm sorry if this offended you or anyone else but you need to have an open mind imagry wise to fully understand this peice of work Number 5:Thanks for all the comments and thankyou to the people who were trying to calm down solXfYr
Do you not understand that things aren't always meant literally? And if it offended you so much... Why did you waste your time commenting on it?
Do you not understand that things aren't always meant literally? And if it offended you so much... Why did you waste your time commenting on it? [/b][/quote] Exactly,I saw what a huge political debait you were having with Dedicated in his excellent peice of work 'Bleed The Blood Of Love' and I'd rather not have one in my set of lyrics thanks
you know what, i am being a hard-ass. the song is not the best, though. just try to use some imagery that we haven't seen before, and you'll get better as you get older too.