This song is inspired by a short poem a certain someone that I know wrote. Most of this song isn't based on anything; I simply wrote lyrics that kind of tied in with what she had written. This song is heavily influenced by Linkin Park and Funeral for a Friend, as well. The verses and bridge are rapped and the chorus is sung, all Linkin Park-style. "Shadow" I can tell by the way she talks And I can tell by the way she walks She’s got the world in her back pocket And she’s not afraid to flaunt it Shapely as she moves in the bright sunlight Making sure she’s in everyone’s sights But behind the façade she hides her past A past that she wishes she didn’t have She loves the compliments and takes them in But doesn’t know just how to begin She wants to tell her story to all around So that maybe then she’d be found Her eyes shine when they’re not filled with tears From hiding the bruises through all these years She just wants to be loved, wants to be held Just wants to show the world how she’s felt And when she disappears out of our sights That little light doesn’t shine so bright She hides in the shadows, waits for the sun Waits for the person she can call the one Longing is the look in her eyes When she’s looking at me The hope and desperation Is the only thing that I can see (But I can’t help her at all) Longing is the look in her eyes When she’s looking at me The hope and desperation Is the only thing that I can see Is this how she’s meant to live When she’s got so much more than this to give? Her friends don’t know the story she hides ‘Cause she’s got no one that she can confide And when the twinkle in her eyes comes to a stop I’m reminded of all that I’ve got The pain that I keep is nothing compared To the things she’s been through, the things she’s shared And I can hardly take the way that she looks Hiding inside every cranny and nook The shadows can only conceal her for so long Until the sun creeps in and it’s all gone I remember when she was real quiet No one ever thought that she’d be a riot Now she’s more open to the world around But she still doesn’t trust enough to make a sound About the torment she suffered, the lies she’s lived Ever since she was taken from her crib When she looks back on these memories Her shadow’s the only thing she can see The only shoulder she could depend on When she needed a person she could cry on Guiding her in the right direction Protecting her from all her misconceptions But now she’s reaching out for a chance to start again And I’ll be there right with her ‘til the end Longing is the look in her eyes When she’s looking at me The hope and desperation Is the only thing that I can see (But I can’t help her at all) Longing is the look in her eyes When she’s looking at me The hope and desperation Is the only thing that I can see Time is the only enemy we’ve got in the world And it seems like it’s the very worst for this girl She cries alone at night when there’s no one around Cries out to the stars and the trees in the ground Her tourniquet is wrapped too tight Preventing her from seeing her light With this pen I hope to reach out to her Prove to her that I can give her the world Longing is the look in her eyes When she’s looking at me The hope and desperation Is the only thing that I can see (But I can’t help her at all) Longing is the look in her eyes When she’s looking at me The hope and desperation Is the only thing that I can see Longing is the look in her eyes When she’s looking at me The hope and desperation Is the only thing that I can see (But I can’t help her at all) Longing is the look in her eyes When she’s looking at me The hope and desperation Is the only thing that I can see
I liked a lot of parts in this song Will, it's really good and I wish I could get back to writing again. One standout part is "Guiding her in the right direction Protecting her from all her misconceptions But now she’s reaching out for a chance to start again And I’ll be there right with her ‘til the end" It just flowed really well when rapped in my head, which isnt wrong cause you said it was LP Style. Great work!
Do you have a band? If you do you're gonna make them f'ing famous! Well done! P.S could you please comment on my latest lyrics please