Shadow

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    Will

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    This song is inspired by a short poem a certain someone that I know wrote. Most of this song isn't based on anything; I simply wrote lyrics that kind of tied in with what she had written. This song is heavily influenced by Linkin Park and Funeral for a Friend, as well. The verses and bridge are rapped and the chorus is sung, all Linkin Park-style.

    "Shadow"

    I can tell by the way she talks
    And I can tell by the way she walks
    She’s got the world in her back pocket
    And she’s not afraid to flaunt it
    Shapely as she moves in the bright sunlight
    Making sure she’s in everyone’s sights
    But behind the façade she hides her past
    A past that she wishes she didn’t have
    She loves the compliments and takes them in
    But doesn’t know just how to begin
    She wants to tell her story to all around
    So that maybe then she’d be found
    Her eyes shine when they’re not filled with tears
    From hiding the bruises through all these years
    She just wants to be loved, wants to be held
    Just wants to show the world how she’s felt
    And when she disappears out of our sights
    That little light doesn’t shine so bright
    She hides in the shadows, waits for the sun
    Waits for the person she can call the one

    Longing is the look in her eyes
    When she’s looking at me
    The hope and desperation
    Is the only thing that I can see
    (But I can’t help her at all)
    Longing is the look in her eyes
    When she’s looking at me
    The hope and desperation
    Is the only thing that I can see

    Is this how she’s meant to live
    When she’s got so much more than this to give?
    Her friends don’t know the story she hides
    ‘Cause she’s got no one that she can confide
    And when the twinkle in her eyes comes to a stop
    I’m reminded of all that I’ve got
    The pain that I keep is nothing compared
    To the things she’s been through, the things she’s shared
    And I can hardly take the way that she looks
    Hiding inside every cranny and nook
    The shadows can only conceal her for so long
    Until the sun creeps in and it’s all gone
    I remember when she was real quiet
    No one ever thought that she’d be a riot
    Now she’s more open to the world around
    But she still doesn’t trust enough to make a sound
    About the torment she suffered, the lies she’s lived
    Ever since she was taken from her crib
    When she looks back on these memories
    Her shadow’s the only thing she can see
    The only shoulder she could depend on
    When she needed a person she could cry on
    Guiding her in the right direction
    Protecting her from all her misconceptions
    But now she’s reaching out for a chance to start again
    And I’ll be there right with her ‘til the end

    Longing is the look in her eyes
    When she’s looking at me
    The hope and desperation
    Is the only thing that I can see
    (But I can’t help her at all)
    Longing is the look in her eyes
    When she’s looking at me
    The hope and desperation
    Is the only thing that I can see

    Time is the only enemy we’ve got in the world
    And it seems like it’s the very worst for this girl
    She cries alone at night when there’s no one around
    Cries out to the stars and the trees in the ground
    Her tourniquet is wrapped too tight
    Preventing her from seeing her light
    With this pen I hope to reach out to her
    Prove to her that I can give her the world

    Longing is the look in her eyes
    When she’s looking at me
    The hope and desperation
    Is the only thing that I can see
    (But I can’t help her at all)
    Longing is the look in her eyes
    When she’s looking at me
    The hope and desperation
    Is the only thing that I can see

    Longing is the look in her eyes
    When she’s looking at me
    The hope and desperation
    Is the only thing that I can see
    (But I can’t help her at all)
    Longing is the look in her eyes
    When she’s looking at me
    The hope and desperation
    Is the only thing that I can see
     
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    Casual D

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    I liked a lot of parts in this song Will, it's really good and I wish I could get back to writing again.

    One standout part is

    "Guiding her in the right direction
    Protecting her from all her misconceptions
    But now she’s reaching out for a chance to start again
    And I’ll be there right with her ‘til the end"

    It just flowed really well when rapped in my head, which isnt wrong cause you said it was LP Style.

    Great work!
     
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    Will

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    Thanks. :D
     
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    Evi

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    I like it, It's great :) .
     
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    Adam

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    Good work keep it up.
     
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    Thanks for the comments.
     
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    Great job!
     
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    Good work! it's really great.
     
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    Thanks.
     
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    Do you have a band? If you do you're gonna make them f'ing famous! Well done!

    P.S could you please comment on my latest lyrics please :)
     

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