"Move On" By Hellflame Prophecy And Dedicated My brain is pounding Against the sides of my skull The memories of you are a grey dull The clock next to your picture Says Midday But there's no fun in the sun For me today Slow torture Killing me from inside Like the pain Of hearing your lies I try to smile And hide the cuts and bruises But still stuck in denial I beleive whoever choses loses But forget what I say And forget what you've said I used to crave for the end But it Never broke nor even bend The thoughts of you Never seem to leave me I still love your smile Even though You've deceived me But now we must move on Remembering you Makes me feel strange Is it right That I feel enraged? Is it normal To love and to hate? Is it normal to forsee your fate? can it be This was Meant to be I refuse to beleive what others say they see After the sh*t i did to myself because of you The black eye to my right Proves how much I hate you The thoughts of you Never seem to leave me How could I love you When you've decieved me And now we must move on Your smile says your happy But there's always something more Your always devious and mischeivous thats why I'm out the door And now I must move on And now I must move on The thoughts of you never seem to leave me I still love you Even though you're deceiving I hate you (And now we must move on) I love You (And now we must move one) I Hate you (And now we must move on) I Love you And now we cannot move on...
Just want to add a little backround here: I spoke to Dave (dedicated) a few days ago on MSN and because I felt we both were strong forces in writers cove I thought it would be a cool idea to combine our musical minds and this is the outcome.I hope you lot like it and please comment on it in any way you chose
i really like it. especially the part about mid way through the whole "The thoughts of you Never seem to leave me...." that just kinda hits close to home for me. great song.
Nice job. Good to see the two world power combining for the common good of unseating the throne of former Writer's Cove hermits. Sorry... Great song though, I really like it.
This is a grammer mistake, it should be "bent". but that would screw your rhyme so try this I used to crave for the end But it never broke, nor would it bend ____________- It was good though
"And hide the cuts and bruises But still stuck in denial" That one hits close to home. Great job. You two work well together. I'd LOVE to hear more from you guys.