Yep...this may or may not suck. ------ I'm alive You can tell by the stains on my face The scars are hidden, you can tell I'm a waste And I care You can tell by the lines I abuse And the way that I always find some way to lose The slam of the door and the stains on the floor And the way you can tell that I've done it before Chorus: Let me in I swear I'm an inspiration Without motivation, I'm not even faking Let me in Cause you know I know more about this I can take every hit and I'm not even sick Well I wasn't so sick at the time I feel fine You can tell by the way that I choak The reason's the same I've got nowhere to go I'm awake It explains why my eyes are still shut My only complaint is I can't get enough And I'm sick as fuck but I feel alive And the sun is up so fuck I'm alright Chorus I wasn't so sick at the time But you know how things can change I used to care but that was only a phase I'm so tired I've given up trying I used to care but I changed my mind
it was really good, but the last verse at the end went down a bit, try other words than fuck, I say using cuss words can show lack of vocabulary, only every now again, when reallllllllly pissed or if it fits the mood of a song. "And I'm sick as fuck but I feel alive And the sun is up so fuck I'm alright" right there fuck needs to be replaced, just my opion, but it doesnt suck
Yeah I guess there is a little too much fuck. I thought it sounded weird when I put it there twice at the end. But I was sorta too lazy to change it. I'll change one of them, or just take it out or something. Thanks for reading!