broken home

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    Rachel

    Rachel look at my horse. LPA Super Member

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    i never thought i'd deal with this again
    being in a home full of screaming and yelling
    i thought the reason we live like this
    is to prevent this from happening
    what happened to the promises you made
    saying our loves wouldn't be the same
    i guess you lied to me once again
    same bastard, just a different name

    i'm living in a broken home
    dont wanna be put through this again
    i'm living in a broken home
    i thought that this would be the end

    waking up to bitter fights
    over money and misconception
    going to bed with a sleepless night
    how could she fall for his deception?
    maybe she likes the pain
    maybe she's not willing to admit
    maybe she's just hurt and afraid
    or maybe she just won't let go of him

    i'm living in a broken home
    don't wanna be put through this again
    i'm living in a broken home
    i thought that this would be the end

    night and day the abuse keeps growing
    no matter what the tears keep flowing
    torn apart, the wounds keep bleeding
    he's just that damn decieving
    momma please stop your crying
    i know how hard you're trying
    to keep you two together
    but you should have known it wouldn't last forever

    i'm living in a broken home
    dont wanna be put through this again
    im living in a broken home
    i thought that this would be the end
    im living in a broken home
    its too late to put the pain to rest
    im living in a broken home
    sleeping, dreaming is where my life is best
     
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    Chris Luke

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    Pretty good. But it remindes me of Part Five of "Jesus Of Suburbia"
     
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    Friskey™

    Friskey™ LPA Super Member LPA Addict

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    *cough*paparoachripoff*cough*
    :lol:

    It's good by the way!
     
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    lpassailant

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    Faded read my mind... Thats exactly what I was gunna say!?
     
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    Luke

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    :lol:
    Its good I like it :)
     
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    Rachel

    Rachel look at my horse. LPA Super Member

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    its about my mom.

    so what that it just happens to have the same title.

    i wrote it about my mom's relationship and the home i have to live in.
     
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    LP_Freak_2735

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    Very nice. Who cares if its the same title, right! ^_^ I like it a lot.
     

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