YOUR PROMISES Do you remember. The very first day we met. You told me you loved me. That I wuz the one for you. You promised to never forget where you came from. You said that whatever happens we'll always be together. I just wanna know. What happened to your promises. Wherever I go I think about you and what you said to me. Now I am here Wondering where I went wrong. I still can't believe that I was such a fool. I really believed you and all that crap that you told me. And now I must sit here thinking of you. I just wanna know What happened to your promises Wherever I go I think about you and what you said to me ..me...and what you said to me....me.... and what you... oh I just wanna know What happened to your promises Wherever I go I think about you and what you said to me I just wanna know What happened to your promises Wherever I go I think about you and what you said to me what you said to me. PLEEZ COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well it is decent, pretty good flow, although it's to direct for my liking, try to be less obvious, use metephores and better words than "Crap".... just realized the dude is banned