I'm left here so lonely with nobody's help I'm going insane and I can't escape I feel myself breaking splitting in two don't tell me now just keep doing what you do I don't need your help anymore I'm growing away from you I can't stand myself And you don't even know who I am anymore The fighting won't stop I'll be myself don't tell me what to do don't tell me now I don't need you. Yeah, it kind of rambles on....butI like it.
this is a hard one to come up with a name for, since its so direct, but i can either "My separated self" or "Spilting in Two" Its good though, keep writing, i would love to what you would do with a story driven poem/song. How old are you? well i can say is the more ya write, the better ya get.
I'm 13. Should I post this long story that I wrote on here? It's called...umm.. The Second Tuesday of Last Week. What do you think?