"My Diary" 11 o'clock, as I look around my room, It's pretty dark, but not as pretty as you, I remember, a couple of years ago, When I used to hit on you, and you hated me, I've got it all written down, every word I said, But not on a notepad, on the walls inside my head, They're all followed by, all of your replies, All the "so long"s, and all the "goodbyes," But you never went away, always stayed, And now you're here with me. How convenient for me, I got the girl, or is this all a dream? My songs are like a diary, Witten in rhymes, All my mistakes, all my lies, Like a diary. 11th of June, the summer's round the corner, And I can't wait, for a summer holiday, We've been through, so much this year, I've gotta say, it's better than me chasing you away, I've got it all written down, everything we did, But not on a notepad, on the walls inside my head, There's so much, that we have done, No "so long, you're not the one..." And you never left my side, always stayed, Now you're just, the one for me. How convenient for me, I got the girl, or is this all a dream? My songs are like a diary, Witten in rhymes, All my mistakes, all my lies, Like a diary. Wake me from this dream, 'Cause this must be a dream, It's too good to be true, Even though I want a 'me and you,' Wake me from this dream, 'Cause this must be a dream, You're too good for me, Way too good for me... How convenient for me, I got the girl, or is this all a dream? My songs are like a diary, Witten in rhymes, All my mistakes, all my lies, Like a diary.
I happen to think emo rocks . Also, considering the title of this piece, I think a bit of emo is more than appropriate. Good job! Awesome verse.
Yeah I like it alot,great stuff P.S could you please comment on a few of mine cos I need the opinion of another skilled writer such as yourself
Those lines remind me of a song by Evanescence, I'm not sure if it's released though so [/b][/quote] Hum, weird. Thanks for the comment though, I think