Advents falling

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    Adam

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    Advents falling

    I dream of a Christmas
    Where the white snow seems gold
    Feeling warm, dancing in a season so cold
    I dream of a Christmas
    Where the decorations hang high in pride

    From the skies, snow hits the rooftops
    From your eyes, down pour tear drops
    Under the tree, that’s where the presents lie
    My gift to you; hoping that your heartache stops

    Breaking hearts at this time seems so cold
    Got to keep smiling at this time of year, even if the novelty grows old
    Since we never get to see times like these
    Lets make them the best we ever had
    Put up the lights with a smile
    Embrace what you have, stop living on what you once had

    From the skies, snow hits the rooftops
    From your eyes, down pour tear drops
    Under the tree, that’s where the presents lie
    My gift to you; hoping that your heartache stops


    Imagine advents falling
    Pass the time ‘till one white morning
    Pass the time ‘till presents open
    Pass the time ‘till the family smiles’

    I dream of a Christmas
    Where the white snow seems gold
    Feeling warm, dancing in a season so cold
    I dream of a Christmas
    Where the decorations hang high in pride
     
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    sickcycle

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    I like it, has "glass is half full" optimistic feel, basic story line what have you is over done, but, weaving that with a creative Christmas twist makes this poem/song a good read.
     
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    Adam

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    Thanx for the comment :)
     

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