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    Joe

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    Here is a piece of some lyrics i recently wrote, It's a work in progress and i don't name my work. Feel free to give positive or negative feedback.

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    I contradict myself with every spoken word,
    Go against all odds to make myself be heared,
    With every contradiction i sell a piece of me,
    You all buy the lies just to see me pay,
    The guilt becomes my sin, my ego is my saint,
    Because i'm too proud to regret, when i run out of blame,

    I'm weak, you're strong,
    You're right, i'm wrong,
    I'm everything you said i'd be and i cannot face the fact,
    You're everything i would have been if i didn't stab you in the back,

    With every lonely walk comes my humble shame,
    I could run towards the crowds but it won't ever be the same,
    I thought i sold it all and had nothing left to give,
    But now i pay the price, that i don't deserve to live,
    Breathing becomes my sin, i have no fucking saint,
    Because i'm too proud to regret, to regret it all again.
     
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    Vampire

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    Boom shaka laka that was incredible. :blush:
     
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    Joe

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    Wow, thanks a lot man. :)
     
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    That was good!
     
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    Thank you. :)
     
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    Nice one Uncle Raj!
     
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    Thank you Jamie. :)
     
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    I love it :thumbsup:
     
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    Joe

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    Thank you Jenn. ^_^
     
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    This is the first piece I read of you and I absolutely love it! Good job Joe. ^_^
     
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    Joe

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    Heh, well it is the first piece i have posted. :blush: Thank you so much Marj. ^_^
     
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    Reminds me of something a metal band would write!
     
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    Do you have more pieces work? :D
     
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    Joe

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    Thanks Twitch, i'll take that as a compliment. :D

    To Marj: I have quite a few lyrics, i'll probably post some more when i feel like it. :)
     
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    Messy Marj

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    Ok, thanks. ^_^
     

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