Wolf You have me pinned down on the ground With my life hanging on a thread Your cold stare stabs me in my heart Tearing me limb from limb Thanks for unlocking the door I tried so hard to close Do you realize how far I got in forgetting its existence? Then you came out of it and brought with you all of this Why do you even care what my status is… If you're doing fine without me? If you're happy with him and not me? If you want it to be over then stop looking back Goodbye happiness and hello feeling-like-crap Salutations my old friends from weeks ago I thought I’d never feel you again but behold Misery has surged back like a tsunami of water Weak and defenseless I scream, but why bother? Beware of the wolf that’ll let you run away But it’s only a head start before she hunts you down again Because she’ll see that you’re adjusting a bit And she’ll attack you and won’t have the nerve to admit That she wants you back because her pride is bigger Than the love you keep for her, waiting to deliver She can’t stand the thought of you with someone new Even though she’s already found someone to replace you This is what you wanted, right? If I’m wrong, then shine a light Because you said you’ve moved on But what do you really want? Am I your backup if all else fails? Would you rather have me wait until I staled? You know I’m gum wrapped around your finger And I’ll still want you no matter how long the hurt lingers… No matter how many guys enter your life and try To wipe away the tears I put in your eyes If you want me back, stop the games, it’s enough Come forth and bathe me with your love
you're going deep! keep going, you're doing good. the flow is bit harder to get here but does it matter? maybe not.
You don't need to have a "flow" when you write poetry as good as this. Keep it up, Vamp. [/b][/quote] Hahaha. Vamp (n.) A woman who uses her sex appeal to entrap and exploit men. Thank you for your kind words though, Will.
Thanks a bunch! [/b][/quote] hope you didnt feel i put you down! flow no flow, it was good and i liked it.
hope you didnt feel i put you down! flow no flow, it was good and i liked it. [/b][/quote] No, no, not at all. In fact, it wasn't meant to flow as easy. It's supposed to have an abruptness to it at times as if I just stopped writing and began speaking to her and accusing her of making it hard on me.