Very Serious Poem I wrote

This is a very serious poem I wrote about a tuff time in my life...

Rose's are red, violets are blue
He is stupid, and so are you!

Any feedback?

 

Wow, dude, those lyrics are deep. I hope you pull out of this one...

 

I'm hoping

 

that touched my heart.

 

Amazing. 13 out of 10.

 

Thank you everyone, thank you

 

LMFAO.

This was better than my reply.. lol.

 

it sucks!

 

All feedback is welcome.

But come on, you must be joking, those words are almost as good as LP's!

 

*as a Kerrang reporter*

The lyrics of Chester 76 are whiney nu-metal, AKA 13 year old flaming words. But we here at Kerrang! give it KKKKK, for effort. Did I mention, thr greatest band in the world is 98 Degrees? Thats real music, forget deep lyrics, we need songs about that girl who dumped that guy and now they need to make an entire CD on it. Brillance.

I feel better now. Kidding Chester

 

u gotta be kidding me...

 

that is very very very serious. i think it could just be the best poem i have ever read it my life! you are a real great writer.. do some more

 

yep very serious

 

I'm feelin the VIBE man... the atmosphere is crazy... i dig your words man... dude.. roses....

 

I'm working on another one now, expect it soon :chemist: :chemist:

 

man , that poem really touches me , the lyrics are deep , it makes me wanna make a poem like that

 

Sereiously dude, I'm freaking crying over that one.. :'(

 

OMG ya know I couldn't write something like that if I tried

 

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