This, That, Back...

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    Dedicated

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    Anyway, as I said... this was inspired by the pic in Hana's sig :lol: Yeah, I don't have a life, etc, etc... But, it's pretty weird cause I came up with the first verse yesterday, only to be told today by my (then) girlfriend, that she didn't wanna go out with me... Wooo... Spooky... :p

    "This, That, Back..."

    He sits there,
    Not knowing what's instore for him,
    Will he know by next year?
    Or will you be married?
    Do you plan on telling him?
    Just do it, or don't,
    Because he is me...

    Remember kids, it's down the road,
    Not across the street, bleed to death,
    Give into defeat,
    But make it count,
    If you do,
    And don't come crawling back,
    'Cause back is this,
    And this leads to that...

    I bit my tongue,
    As I found out what was instore,
    I didn't want to fight back,
    Didn't want to be married,
    I can't believe that it's this,
    You did it, but no,
    I won't give up on this...

    Remember kids, it's down the road,
    Not across the street, bleed to death,
    Don't give into defeat,
    But make it count,
    If you do,
    And don't come crawling back,
    'Cause back is this,
    And this leads to that...

    Don't bother to comprehend the words you speak,
    As the words you speak make you fucking breath reak,
    And all of those words that are so damn weak,
    Make all of my future seem so bleak,
    Don't bother to comprehend the words you speak,
    As the words you speak make you fucking breath reak,
    And all of those words that are so damn weak,
    Make all of my future seem so bleak.

    You never listened to me, I bit off my tongue,
    Bled all over your feet, this is giving in to defeat,
    And this is making it count,
    I've come crawling back, but back wasn't this,
    And it didn't lead to that.

    I wish these words were never said...
     
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    Luke

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    Its good,a little confusing but still good :)
     
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    Nice man
     
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    Branden

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    Pretty cool, I couldn't remember what Hana's sig was, but after the "Remember Kids" part, I remembered that infamous but funny image. Nice writing though, sorry about things with your girlfriend...
     
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    Dedicated

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    Meh, it was destined to fail :lol:





    And, thanks a lot for the comments :)
     

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