Everybody Lies

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    Vampire

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    Everybody Lies

    Nothing you say
    Makes sense to me
    What you said last night
    Not the same as last week

    You feed me your words
    But then change the feed
    Bags under my eyes
    You’re stealing my sleep

    I make the attempt
    The first one to speak
    But instead of my words
    I regurgitate screams

    Tears gush in my mouth
    I can’t fucking breathe
    I had it all planned
    But you raped it from me

    And all that it took
    Your dark eyes on me
    Though the anger was there
    So was deceit

    Don’t blend in the clouds
    Smiling falsely
    Why do you get mad
    To my honesty

    It’s become so impure
    We’re too stubborn to see
    Our chance of survival
    Smaller it seems

    Because I’m lying to you
    You’re lying to me
    When deep down inside
    Love we want and we need
     
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    Casual D

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    Wow..I really like your stuff dude, it flows good and no part ever seems 'corny' or rushed along like some of the other songs/poems in here.

    I can see you put a lot of thought into it, I'm giving you a 10. If this isnt a song you should make it one.
     
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    Vampire

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    Thanks a million. B)
     
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    Wow.

    Thát's fucking great.
     
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    Thank you. :blush:
     
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    Yeah, I so totally agree.
     
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    Yeah, I so totally agree. [/b][/quote]
    Thank you very much. :teehee:
     
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    iamrighthereandnow

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    i like this piece very much, the flow here is the best i've seen of your work. ;)
     
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    Thank you! :D
     

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