Sleeing In Silence

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    Jamie

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    Verse 1:
    I colour your broken picture
    Scrawl the love letters you wrote
    Across the blank canvas that stands before me
    I paint this picture, full of regret

    Chorus:.
    I can see your not the only one who feels this way
    And your not alone in this game

    Verse 2:.
    Gradients blur together
    Everything fades to black
    Your broken smile
    Wipes tears from my cheek

    Chorus:.
    I can see your not the only one who feels this way
    And your not alone in this game

    Bridge:.
    Just to take back
    All the things we ever said
    Rewrite our history and
    Start again at the end

    Chorus:.
    I can see your not the only one who feels this way
    And your not alone in this game
    I can see your not the only one who feels this way
    And your not alone in this game

    Outro:.
    I could have been anything but this
     
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    Friskey™

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    That's really good!

    And just to say something...is that supposed to be called Sleeping in Slience? Cause if so, you misspelled it!
     
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    Jamie

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    Yeh, it is..It was late so yeh..sorry

    and thanks
     
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    I really like it, Jamie :)


    I like the way you've, like, mixed 2 different art ideas ^_^
     
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    Jamie

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    I have?

    Explain man...
     
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    Messy Marj

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    I like it too Jamie ^_^ Good job
     
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    The writing of the lyrics mixed with the idea of painting ;)
     
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    I love your writing, Jamie, keep it up. ^_^
     
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    Jamie

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    I'm kinda having writers block...again...

    I've had it for like a month..and still have it...yet somehow I managed to pull that out of it..

    Thanks all
     

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