R.I.P

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    Burningsoul

    Burningsoul Well-Known Member

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    R.I.P
    Rest in peace my enemy
    Buried under so cleverly
    Not disturbed and not disturbing
    You cant confuse or consume me

    So your'e locked away inside you rotting cell
    Deep down under where no one can hear you yell
    Spend your precious time in a chlostrophobic box
    Cant hear the wind or the ticking of the clock
    That counts down your time with no remorse
    Counts it down, till your a mere corpse
    Lifeless, souless with no blood in your veins
    Youve heard this many times but hear it again

    R.I.P
    Rest in peace my enemy
    Buried under so cleverly
    Not disturbed and not disturbing
    You cant confuse or consume me

    So your rotting away, locked inside a coffin
    Guilt eating away at you from within
    The once confusing thoughts in your head
    Have abandoned and vacated, leaving you braindead
    No memories of the present or the painful past
    And upon you a shadow begins to cast
    Vengeful, hateful it cant be tamed
    Youve heard this many times but hear it again

    R.I.P
    Rest in peace my enemy
    Buried under so cleverly
    Not disturbed and not disturbing
    You cant confuse or consume me
    Rest in peace my enemy
    Buried under so cleverly
    Not disturbed and not disturbing
    You cant confuse or consume me
     
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    Adam

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    I think it's great :)

    Keep up the good work
     
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    Burningsoul

    Burningsoul Well-Known Member

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    cheerz m8, its good to get some positive feedback :D
     
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    iamrighthereandnow

    iamrighthereandnow Well-Known Member

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    i wish i could send this to this *** old enemy of mine. nice one! as a christmas card with your poem on it, perfect, i think i will search for her address.
     
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    Burningsoul

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    Glad i could help, thanx for the comment
     

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