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Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Vampire, Dec 2, 2004.

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    Vampire

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    Hello Stranger

    I don’t want this to be what we say
    As we waste our departed days away
    Why won’t you look my way
    Why do we say the things we say

    Actions could overpower the words
    But without them our dialect hurts
    At least for me I don’t know about you
    Maybe your days of tears are through

    Or are your tears now filled with rage
    Do you keep your heart from me in a cage
    Or is it already in someone else’s hands
    As he keeps it warm with words of the upper hand

    Because I know I’m the one to blame
    But the lack of you with me drives me insane
    Fuck everything bad I ever told you
    I’m so sorry I just want to hold you

    My stupid mouth always lands me in shit
    But your heart has always had power to forgive
    Look into my eyes and see that I truly can’t live
    Everyday is spent with tears and heartache from within

    I feel the bottomless feeling inside that goes into an abyss
    Retracting over and over as my yelping persists
    I cry out to you hoping it’ll reach your ears and not miss
    I’ll never be able to tell you how sorry I am for all of this

    I move closer and you back away from my hands
    You say you can never look at me the same and I understand
    But does it hurt when you think about what we used to have
    And do you not return to me because you’re afraid déjà vu is at hand

    This isn’t how our fairytale romance is supposed to end
    I can’t live my life in the shadow of always being your friend
    I know it’s not okay and I’m an asshole for breaking the promise
    But I’ll never promise anything unless it’s for you again

    I’ll never love another because all of my love belongs to you
    We can work this out together if you want us to
    Or you can move on and leave me out of your heart too
    But just know that nobody will ever love you like I do
     
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    iamrighthereandnow

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    the message touches and comes clear, choice of words is not so great at times and it doesnt flow easy, but i like it regardless because the message in what you are saying, is powerful and moving.
     
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    Vampire

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    Thanks for all the criticism. I agree with all of it. ^_^
     

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